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Wonderful poem. It actually elicited a feeling of anxiety and then relief at the end!
Oh, how spot-on. I think many, if not all, of us recognize this.
But, you put that to very good use with this poem. Well done!
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Wonderful poem. It actually elicited a feeling of anxiety and then relief at the end!
Oh, how spot-on. I think many, if not all, of us recognize this.
But, you put that to very good use with this poem. Well done!